free conscience

these images..
they keep turnin in the mind like blood curdling ritual stages
on n' off video scenes with hd visual pages
steel bars to the mind locked up in steel cages
paramedics changin these stale bandages
sickle to the neck spill blood like haemorrhage's
sick..taken high by nicorrete..coffee n cigarettes
strain to free the mind like some love sick bachelorrete
stained souls with gapin holes like mosquito nets
pained pasts with chained roles like hand cuffin sets
arrest him but jail him in a broken chest
with liquor bottles placed in his burial casket
a drink with the devil in hell ain't a bit of threat
drunk in heaven or hades cleansed evil decapitation sets
like clean out the closet...burn to ash skeleton n' pests
broken chains n fresh air breath...free mind sets.

Nice piece, I.think maybe you had too many multi sylobal words. Tried to make it too complicated but that's ok. That happens sometimes, its a good sign/habbit. It means you.care about the top quality of your writing.
The only thing that really sticks out to me that I think you should change is the ending of; "paramedics cure the ripped phalanges" because you tried to rhyme it with "cages" but "phalanges" has a long E on the end so the pronunciation sounds pike (fa-lan-gees)
But that's really all. Nice job.
Also thesauruses are good, but don't rely on them.

thanx...still workin on the syllables..for the phrase could replace it with..'paramedics changin these stale bandages'...

Yea that'd work

the flow's better..