when the sky bleeds

i think this is my best work so far but as always constructive criticism please!!!!

The end of days,
none are saved
man has raved for years.
False deity true
rules over you
the root of all our fears.

But listen to me
when the sky bleeds
the truth will come
smashing through the dark like a storm.
You'd better believe
I’ve planted the seeds
and you will all be reborn
when the sky bleeds.

You cant comprehend,
but you depend
on false tales to get you through
depression comes
you're the only one
a bullet just meant for you

please hear my plea
cut through the misery
you're the deceiver,
the white rose with the hidden thorn
you'll come to me
in a lonely sea
the darkest before the dawn
Oh when the sky bleeds.

Oh the sky is bleeding now
can you see it pouring down
feel it sink into your skin
bloody rain marks your sin

you're wanted, forsaken
nothing left to do
lonely is your plague
forget it we're through
when the sky bleeds.

Wow,I thought Walking Contridiction was dark,but you've got me beat by a mile.Good work Tom,plus I love your user name.Anything with the word"atomic" in it.I used to love the band name "Atomic Rooster",Ronnie Woods' first band.When i read "end of days"it reminded me of Diablo Diane another song I posted.So.......if your work reminds me of my own work,I think your on the right track and a personal favorite.Good work,keep on rocking!