Immune to Happiness

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  1. Zakynthos said: 07-06-2012 10:42 AM

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    MoonRide*r* said: 07-06-2012 11:43 AM

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    Nice style!

    I want to suggest a couple of changes:

    Tired of breathing since then

    Burying (or Hiding) my face in my hands
    I wonder why this sunlight is so fragile (or the sun's rays)

    And in the chorus, maybe something a little better than "I mostly hurt"... but I'm not sure what... So much hurt?

    I really like this.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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  3. Zakynthos said: 07-06-2012 12:46 PM

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    Thank you, I really appreciate it.
     

  4. JennaP said: 07-07-2012 05:58 AM

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    I really dig this lyrics - the only lines i would change is "In my whole life I mostly hurt" in the chorus - somehow it doesn't fit....
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