Without You

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  1. Zakynthos said: 07-31-2012 03:12 AM

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    MoonRide*r* said: 07-31-2012 06:04 PM

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    Great! It kinda reminds me of stuff I used to try to write, 12-18 months ago.
    Does the verse "I knew you were scared of me" serve as a bridge? That's the way it feels. Regardless, this is some fine writing.
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    Doug Denslowe said: 08-01-2012 03:14 AM

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    "So put on your wild beauty",I couldn't have said it better!Your becoming a force to reckon with!Good job,Zak!
     

  4. Zakynthos said: 08-01-2012 06:50 AM

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    Quote Originally Posted by MoonRide*r* View Post
    Great! It kinda reminds me of stuff I used to try to write, 12-18 months ago.
    Does the verse "I knew you were scared of me" serve as a bridge? That's the way it feels. Regardless, this is some fine writing.
    It could be a bridge. Thank you.