this is some lyrics that I wrote. please tell me what you think!

please tell me what you think, I need some comment and advice.

What They Told In Fairytale

The Prince get down from his white horse
Flip his hair and wear his beautiful cloak
Walking to the wood with sword in his pocket
Trying to kiss and wake the princess

After the rescue and saving drama
They went back to the kingdom
With smile and cheer from the people
They married cause they are meant to be

But it’s just a fairytales and bedtime stories
The prince and his white horse didn’t exist in real life
I know cause nobody try to wake me from my long sleep
Nobody rescue me like they told in fairytale

Everyone said if it’s not happy it’s not the ending
It’s been forever since I read all those fairytales
I’ll be 20 soon and my prince never come and save me
I see so many white horse but not prince charming’s

it’s just a fairytales and bedtime stories
The prince and his white horse didn’t exist in real life
I know cause nobody try to wake me from my long sleep
Nobody rescue me like they told in fairytale

And here’s what smart girl would do
Stand up and defend yourself
You need no prince charming and his white horse
Wake yourself and save yourself
You can do everything with no man on your side

it’s just a fairytales and bedtime stories
The prince and his white horse didn’t exist in real life
I know cause nobody try to wake me from my long sleep
Nobody rescue me like they told in fairytale

Hi Ladyalvrt, let me tell you the truth, when I started reading I thought it was going to be a boring lyrics (because you start talking about fairy tales), but suddenly the story made a twist and I noticed is not a silly love song (as said Sir Paul McCartney), but this is a remarkable work, I don´t know if you have planned music for this, but for the moment I think is a real poem, it has a solid structure and original point of view. Another truth is that I am not an expert in music and lyrics, but as I noticed in some other songs maybe our friends will ask you to introduce a bridge or something like that, but from an amateur lover of good songs I tell you it seems so good to me, amazing work, congratulations and thanks. !please help us to improve or comment something friends and experts of ATL¡