Made Up Reality

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    I'm waiting for the end
    I'm waiting for the beginning
    Of life to set in
    And leave me hanging
    I'm waiting for the plot
    To thicken
    Like jello in the maken
    "Chorus"
    I want you to feel
    You To see
    Everything inside of me
    And let you know
    What it's like to be me
    In my made up reality

    I'm waiting for the darkness to set in
    And the world to feel it
    Boiling within
    Falling down like rain
    I want to hear the people
    Scream and shout
    About a world they know
    Nothing about
    I want everyone to step inside
    The reality beyond these eyes
    And understand my plan
    And the way I got to live
    To understand
    All the things deep inside
    My minds gone blind
    "Chorus"
    I want you to feel
    You To see
    Everything inside of me
    And let you know
    What it's like to be me
    In my made up reality

    Well come on guys
    Take a trip inside my mind
    You never know
    What you will find
    In the crevice of uncertain times
    You'll find a life lacking of time
    Cause I just don't care about
    The pain of life
    I'm living for the day
    That we all feel right
    Yeah
    " Chorus"
    I want you to feel
    You To see
    Everything inside of me
    And let you know
    What it's like to be me
    In my made up reality
    I want you to feel
    You To see
    Everything inside of me
    And let you know
    What it's like to be me
    In my made up reality
    In my made up reality
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Read any good books lately?
     
  3. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    I need to start reading life of pi but that hasn't been working too well.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  4. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    The movie life of pi inspired a lot of my current writings.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    Johnb31: I hear this rather "sing-songy," a bit nursery-rhymish. Is that how you meant it? If so, that is a nice juxtaposition to the serious theme of "look harder, you might really see something here, even if I am making it up." (My interpretation of your general meaning.)
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Johnb31 View Post
    The movie life of pi inspired a lot of my current writings.
    I always have mine with a scoop of ice cream.
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    It's kind of a rap spoken word kind of song with a sarcastic feel to it I was trying to write it in a way that reflects who I am.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Absolutely "discovered" a book by Stewart Lee Allen:"In The Devils Garden". Published 2002 both in New York and Canada, Random House Inc.
    Hilarious!


    @Doug: this in answer to "any good book lately?"
    Last edited by amaryn; 01-02-2013 at 10:58 AM.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    Absolutely "discovered" a book by Stewart Lee Allen:"In The Devils Garden". Published 2002 both in New York and Canada, Random House Inc.
    Hilarious!


    @Doug: this in answer to "any good book lately?"
    Amaryn,
    I'm glad I can always count on you for the straight scoop.I'll go to the library to check it out.