this isn't a fairytale

Hey this is my first post and i have to say that i'm 14 and from germany so my english isn't the best so sorry for that

lyrics:

I know i’m gonna fail the test
Doesn’t matter how hard i try
You’ll always find a way to
Make me fail

They say everything’s gonna be alright in the end
Like in those old fairytales
But i know this isn’t a fairytale
There’s no prince on a white horse who will come and save me
‘cause this isn’t a fairytale
Oh oh no
Oh oh no

I‘m gonna be in the dark alone
I‘m gona drown in the ocean now
There’s no helping hand form e
There’s no one who will save mylife

They say everything’s gonna be alright in the end
Like in those old fairytales
But i know this isn’t a fairytale
There’s no prince on a white horse who will come and save me
‘cause this isn’t a fairytale
Oh oh no
Oh oh no



Can i have your white horse
I need to make ma an happy enfd on my own
Cause if this not a fairytale i wanny have at least an ending like in those old fairytales
Oh and this is my happy end

This isn't bad at all. At least it's way better than what I wrote when I was 14 years old. I'm confident that if you keep writing you'll be able to improve your skills and grow as a lyricist. Grüsse aus Holland!

Like my good friend Peter says,not only isn't this "not bad" but considering it's not in your native tongue,I'm quite impressed!It has a rhythm that makes it easy to imagine how it's to be sung.It may not be what you had in mind,but who cares,it can be sung!I always judge a song by if I can imagine how it's to be sung.Good first song lyric,I hope you stick around and write some more.

This is very good for a first post. And, you're right, life is not a fairytale.

honestly the fact that your only 14 and a writing lyrics speaks volumes.. whether they're good or bad. i wish i would have started when i was 14...keep it up, keep learning and writing..learn to write in different style..heck learn it all..like i said i wish i would have started at 14..awesome job on your first post