Abigail and Leon

Abigail Anderson
Star of the day
Caught a boy’s attention
And turned away

Laughing as she ran
Trying to catch a star
Trading love for fame
And for a fancy car

Verse Two:
Leon John Michaelis
Just a guy on the street
Met a girl who thought
That he was under her feet

Didn’t mind a bit bit
Cause he was having fun
Knew that someday she would
See that he was the one

Interesting verses. I feel it needs a hook though.

Originally Posted by BackInBlack

Interesting verses. I feel it needs a hook though.

Filled in the hook and a new chorus and renamed the song Sugarpop Tease


Verse One:
Abigail Anderson
Star of the day
Caught a boy’s attention
And turned away

Laughing as she ran
Trying to catch a star
Trading love for fame
And for a fancy car

Verse Two:
Leon John Michaelis
Just a guy on the street
Met a girl who thought
That he was under her feet

Didn’t mind a bit bit
Cause he was having fun
Knew that someday she would
See that he was the one

Chorus:
And he said

“Hot shot! Superstar!
Show off supreme!
Nightshadow, daytripper
Afternoon dream.”

“Come to me. Run from me
Just as you please
Give a little take a lot
Sugarpop tease.”