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This is my first song, and first time writing, so please do not flame/cuss etc.
Please.

My Destiny
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I want to see,
my destiny...
but i guess i have to wait,
till' the time is right

I close my eyes,
I find a Disguise..
I hope to see ... my destiny

I'm out in the rain,
in so much pain...
All alone, nobody's near
to give me the cure..
im just sittin here...

I want to see,
my destiny...
but i guess i have to wait,
till' the time is right.

I look at this home,
with 2 lil' kids...
they run around,
full of joy,
how I wish i could see ... my destiny,

I want to see,
my destiny...
but i guess i have to wait
till the time is right...

im justin sittin here,
with so much fear...
a man walks by,
he gives me his eye,
how so much i wish i could see... my destiny!

Please Rate

Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! Especially for a first time! They are nice and simple, yet they are still clear in what they are saying! I like them they arre very well written! Very well done

Thanks.

really nice