Diana Haddad - Hasafa [*]

Hello!

Can somebody check and correct this please? Thanks!


حسافة ب اول المشوار فات الود يا غدار
7asaafa bawal el meshwar fet el wud ya ghadaar
I’ll regret it from the start of this path, the amiability is over, you traitor


جرحت القلب بغيابك نسيت ان الزمن دوار
Jara7t elgalb begheeyabak, nesseit enez- zmaan dawaar
you hurt my heart with your absence, but you forgot how life (time) has many turns


و اذ ا شفت الغصن يبكي تاكد ما تـت الاسرار
w iza shafat el gha9an yebki, ta2kad maatat el asraar
and even if you see my eyes (branches) cry, you can be sure the secrets have died


حسافة ب اول المشوار فات الود يا غدار
7asaafa bawal el meshwar fet el wud ya ghadaar
I’ll regret it from the start of this path, the amiability is over, you traitor


و جيت اليوم تتوسل تبي نرجع متل اول
w jeet el youm tatwasal tabee narja3 mitel awal
and the day will come when you’ll beg and want us to go back, like in the beginning


انسى د نيتي و ارحل كفا ني ما ابي اعذار
Ensa denyati, w er7al kefaani maa abi a3zhar
forget my world and go away, turn away from me, it's enough (for me), I don't want excuses


اول كنت بي مغرم حبي هايم و تحلم
Awal kent bee mogharam 7obbi haayam w ta7lam
at first you were in love with me, passionate and a dream



و صرت اليوم ما تهتم قلبي في هواك احتار
W 9ort el youm ma tehtam galbi fee hawak e7taar
and now you don't care, my heart is confused about your love

Great Job, 7abibty!
Here are my corrections. =)

Originally Posted by citlalli

و اذ ا شفت الغصن يبكي تاكد ما تـت الاسرار
w iza shafat el gha9an yebki, ta2kad maatat el asraar
and even if you see my eyes (branches) cry, you can be sure the magic (mystery) has died

and even if you see my eyes (branches) cry, you can be sure the secrets have died

انسى د نيتي و ارحل كفا ني ما ابي اعذار
Ensa denyati, w er7al kefaani maa abi a3zhar
forget my world and go away, turn away from me, oh king (father) of excuses

forget my world and go away, turn away from me, It's enough for me, I don't want excuses
Abi = I want (in khaleeji)

اول كنت بي مغرم حبي هايم و تحلم
Awal kent bee mogharam 7obbi haayam w ta7lam
at first I was in love my love, a passionate love, but then it went to your head (you started to dream)

At first you were in love with me, passionate and dream

و صرت اليوم ما تهتم قلبي في هواك احتار
W 9ort el youm ma tehtam galbi fee hawak e7taar
and now the day has come when my heart doesn’t care about the qualms of your love anymore

and now you don't care, my heart is confused about your love

That khaleeji "abi" is so sneaky and treacherous LOL


And I still get some sentences the other way around (like in "you were in love...", not "I was in love..."

Thanks a lot dear :-*

Originally Posted by citlalli

That khaleeji "abi" is so sneaky and treacherous LOL


And I still get some sentences the other way around (like in "you were in love...", not "I was in love..."

Thanks a lot dear :-*

You're most welcome Lulu, you're already perfect at Arabic.
الله يوفقك ..

Originally Posted by LoOlya

You're most welcome Lulu, you're already perfect at Arabic.

Me perfect in arabic? Ya reit!! may God Listen to you

Originally Posted by LoOlya

الله يوفقك ..

Thank you; jazaaki Allah khayran <3

Originally Posted by citlalli

Me perfect in arabic? Ya reit!! may God Listen to you

Akid, you are!
what do you what else ? you're translating the song alone, a few mistakes but they are nothing ya3ni. =)

Thank you; jazaaki Allah khayran <3

و إياكي يا حبيبتي

Yes, I've done a lot of progress in Arabic el7amdulellah nonetheless what I want is none or at least less mistakes so I guess what I got to do is keep learning and learning and learning!!

Thanks for your kind words and good night

CITALLI great job!!!

Thank you